tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4792815515390696434.post3222172032147304126..comments2023-04-13T08:06:59.988-07:00Comments on To Live in a Rainbow: Two poems one songKeliaMeganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11943536028984842299noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4792815515390696434.post-37133934441555259372009-04-21T08:25:00.000-07:002009-04-21T08:25:00.000-07:00You're right-- I'll definitely have to think about...You're right-- I'll definitely have to think about that. I think the third one could really benefit from some images...KeliaMeganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11943536028984842299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4792815515390696434.post-82624541982008627602009-04-21T02:32:00.000-07:002009-04-21T02:32:00.000-07:00In all three of these I miss your usual vivid imag...In all three of these I miss your usual vivid images. These are very "wordy" poems...words about ideas with no images to contain them. That is not necessarily bad...just different. I wonder what would happen if you tried to get the feelings and sense of these poemes into an image or two?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07023413530687513199noreply@blogger.com