tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4792815515390696434.post8043947038632205302..comments2023-04-13T08:06:59.988-07:00Comments on To Live in a Rainbow: PoemKeliaMeganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11943536028984842299noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4792815515390696434.post-44890640609836411392009-02-28T05:57:00.000-08:002009-02-28T05:57:00.000-08:00Thanks so much! I agree, and I think the second on...Thanks so much! I agree, and I think the second one makes more sense too. :D <3KeliaMeganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11943536028984842299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4792815515390696434.post-32011178772487008572009-02-27T19:00:00.000-08:002009-02-27T19:00:00.000-08:00I like them both, you're poetry is amazing, Ke...I like them both, you're poetry is amazing, Kelia. However, when I say it aloud I personally like the second one more - has to do with the way it flows off the tongue towards the end. Of course, this is *your* poem, so which ever one makes you happiest makes us happiest ;]. <BR/><BR/>Honestly, though, the entire poem is amazing. I need to check here more often!!!<BR/><BR/>Love ya,<BR/><BR/>Katie ♥ ♥AnnaRosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04738367535286185196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4792815515390696434.post-33279384303823777122009-02-24T11:26:00.000-08:002009-02-24T11:26:00.000-08:00So I had Anna read this poem (and I'm posting this...So I had Anna read this poem (and I'm posting this on her computer which is why it say's I'm her) and she suggested changing the end. Does this work better?<BR/><BR/>Seas may rage<BR/>but ground is firm beneath me<BR/>hold on to it<BR/>and try to breathe in<BR/>water.AnnaRosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04738367535286185196noreply@blogger.com