And here is yet another poem. It started out as a haiku, because it was Monday night and I really needed to write a poem, but it got longer but still in the format so it's kind of a four-verse haiku. Except that there is no such thing!
Life is a whirlwind
of tornadoes and sandstorms
dust flies in my face
and I cannot see.
I try to remember
what the sky looks like
when no clouds fly by
but the memory is wrong.
Friendship comes from clouds
from the rain that drops
on a parched desert waiting
for life to arrive
and grow.
The only thing is that the line 'I try to remember' is only six syllables and not seven. I could change that and do 'I wish I could remember', but then that would imply that I can't remember instead of just trying to...? And I'm thinking of naming it The Desert.
Kelia
4 comments:
Hmmm... I can always remember?
But I love it!!! You're awesome at poetry!!! :D
(Also, I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY for the Clara thing.)
I might do that, or maybe I look back and remember. I dont know it doesnt really matter. But thanks for the suggestion.
And thanks! How'd you get my blog?
Just remember, we'd all forgive you (eventually) if you let him live!
:D
I clicked on your name off of my blog and it took me to your profile and I clicked on the link to here!
You're welcome!
And hm.
Ooh I see.
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