So I wrote this today... thoughts?
The music thrums
You can feel it’s beat
In the soles of your feet
As you sway with the drums
The music whirls
You can feel it fly
See it reach for the sky
As you dance, as you twirl
The music slows
You can feel the pain
Flowing soft like the rain
But before all’s despair
The music grows
You can feel it build--
Something new, something filled
With wonder is here
As you move to the flow
The music thrums--
The music whirls--
It slows--
It grows--
Disappears.
Kelia
5 comments:
Lots of fun!
Hey, this is nice:)
Thanks!
Nice work - it's fun to play with rhymes, isn't it? :)
Yes it is :D I didn't even know I was going to rhyme when I started it, but then it just happened in the first verse. Lots of times it makes it harder though.
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