Friday, May 9, 2008


And here is yet another poem. It started out as a haiku, because it was Monday night and I really needed to write a poem, but it got longer but still in the format so it's kind of a four-verse haiku. Except that there is no such thing!

Life is a whirlwind
of tornadoes and sandstorms
dust flies in my face

and I cannot see.
I try to remember
what the sky looks like

when no clouds fly by
but the memory is wrong.
Friendship comes from clouds

from the rain that drops
on a parched desert waiting
for life to arrive

and grow.

The only thing is that the line 'I try to remember' is only six syllables and not seven. I could change that and do 'I wish I could remember', but then that would imply that I can't remember instead of just trying to...? And I'm thinking of naming it The Desert.



literally[lauren] said...

Hmmm... I can always remember?

But I love it!!! You're awesome at poetry!!! :D

(Also, I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY for the Clara thing.)

KrazyK said...

I might do that, or maybe I look back and remember. I dont know it doesnt really matter. But thanks for the suggestion.

And thanks! How'd you get my blog?

Just remember, we'd all forgive you (eventually) if you let him live!


literally[lauren] said...

I clicked on your name off of my blog and it took me to your profile and I clicked on the link to here!

You're welcome!

And hm.

KrazyK said...

Ooh I see.