Friday, May 9, 2008

Poem......again

And here is yet another poem. It started out as a haiku, because it was Monday night and I really needed to write a poem, but it got longer but still in the format so it's kind of a four-verse haiku. Except that there is no such thing!

Life is a whirlwind
of tornadoes and sandstorms
dust flies in my face

and I cannot see.
I try to remember
what the sky looks like

when no clouds fly by
but the memory is wrong.
Friendship comes from clouds

from the rain that drops
on a parched desert waiting
for life to arrive

and grow.

The only thing is that the line 'I try to remember' is only six syllables and not seven. I could change that and do 'I wish I could remember', but then that would imply that I can't remember instead of just trying to...? And I'm thinking of naming it The Desert.

Kelia

4 comments:

literally[lauren] said...

Hmmm... I can always remember?

But I love it!!! You're awesome at poetry!!! :D

(Also, I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY for the Clara thing.)

KrazyK said...

I might do that, or maybe I look back and remember. I dont know it doesnt really matter. But thanks for the suggestion.

And thanks! How'd you get my blog?

Just remember, we'd all forgive you (eventually) if you let him live!

:D

literally[lauren] said...

I clicked on your name off of my blog and it took me to your profile and I clicked on the link to here!

You're welcome!

And hm.

KrazyK said...

Ooh I see.