Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Maybe poem?

So this morning, with utter shock and horror, I remembered. That I forgot to write a poem last week. O_O O_O O_O I might have come up with something though... I went through all my emails and took things I wrote during the week and made sentences into a poem. I really have no idea if it works or if it even sounds like a poem....?

I woke up this morning and looked outside...
It was snowing.
We only have half an inch now,
that's okay with me.
No shoveling yet!

It's so beautiful.

???
I really don't want to have missed a week though, that would be horrible :(
Kelia

3 comments:

Steve Ingraham said...

"woke up this morning

snow

half inch only

I'm okay

no shovel

still beautiful"

Sometimes you find the poem if you strip the language down to the bones.

tuulenhaiven said...

Clever Dad! I was going to try to explain that same idea. I like the how you took things from your e-mails and things. Poetry should definitely come from whatever is going on in your life.

Monica (monsmons) said...

It's so awesome!